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How Saturn Evolved


One day Hampames (Ham pu meez), Zeus' twin brother, wanted children. Hampames had the same powers Zeus had, so they often were mixed up. Since Zeus was the god of Jupiter, Hampames wanted a new planet that he would be the god of and a planet his children could live on. He wanted his planet identical to Jupiter because he was very close to Zeus.

Hampames decided to make the planet next to Jupiter, so he could communicate with his brother easily. He used his powerful lightning bolts to form a planet. After he cast the spell, he looked at the planet. He must have said the wrong spell. Instead of a red planet, he made a yellowish planet. As soon as Hampames looked at it, he remember the fond memories of his mother making yellow urns.

Every time he saw her, she was sitting down molding urns. Hampames decided to call the new planet "Saturn" after his mother. He was still disappointed, though. "Well," he said, "if my planet is different from Zeus', them maybe we won't get mixed up." He liked the idea. He got a little bit overwhelmed and another spell slipped out of powers. He look at his new planet. It had many rings around it. At first he disliked it, but after a few days he thought, "This is the most beautiful planet I've ever seen!"

Pretty soon Hampames' children were born, and he formed thousands of urns all over the planet with his lightning bolts. After awhile, Saturn became civilized. People got bored of looking at urns, so they used them to store dirty laundry. Hampames got into this habit also, being so proud of his planet and forgetting why they were there. So to this day, we call things we store dirty laundry in "hampers."

by George Marzloff

RED SNOW



I learned that skiing can be a dangerous sport. During the winter I went to Massanutten. I was flying down "Diamond Jim, and expert trail, at almost 120 miles per hour. I was doing well, I thought. Then suddenly a mogul came into my sight. I didn't know how high it was, but I didn't have time to turn back. I was really nervous. I closed my eyes and wished for the best. Then I opened my eyes-- I had landed safely. I thought to myself "Wow, I actually made it!" I decided I would ski all the way back to the lodge. Instantly, the lift line for the lift to transport people back to the top was 100 feet in front of me! I had to think fast., I quickly pushed off with my left pole so I could make a sharp right turn, except, I stuck my pole between my skis which made the pole ricochet off the snow into my jaw. After I carved my way to a stop, I realized I couldn't move my jaw. Luckily, a patrol man saw the incident and skied over. My lip was busted open, and it spurting blood out three feet! The snow was turning red around me. I was in a lot of pain. I was rushed to the hospital. I had suffered a severely fractured jaw, and I needed ten stitches in my lip. Even though I love skiing, I don't think I'll be skiing for a very long time.

by George Marzloff

Mother Earth



Mother I can understand your fury.
How much more trash can we bury_
Piles and piles to reach the sky.
We can't let our Earth continue to die.
The oceans are black, filled with oil.
The air gets thick, begins to spoil.
Rainforests are cut down every day.
Oh, Mother Earth. What would she say_
"Why do you keep polluting my waters_
Please stop the madness my sons and daughters."
And now there is another warning.
Think about the global warming.
Where will we go if we destroy our home_
There's nowhere else for us to roam.
How can we know we'll live another day_
Sooner or later we'll have to pay.
We are the cause of our own fate.
We need to learn to love, not hate.
How could we take our Earth for granted_
Some have raved while others ranted.
We all need to take a stand.
Save our one and only land.
Join together, give the Earth a lift,
But please remember it's just a gift.

by Courtney Fulmer



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